Tumoana @ Ōtaki College
I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 13 November 2020
Friday, 21 August 2020
Up in the clouds fight
Way up in the clouds fighting his enemy for a secret Chemicals that will demolish the world… It all started with James choles ( a Secret hero ) with powers, speed, flight, move things with your mind and lazer eyes. As he was told by his crew (the savers) james choles, iron fist with the powers to punch anything in the world and jump 200 Metres high in the sky and luke war with the powers Invincible and able to shape shift.
The savers were told that the demolishers were hiding a dangerous chemical up in the clouds that can kill everyone on the planet apart from the demolishers and luke war. “They are planning on killing everyone tonight” said Jarvis there Organiser. “We should get going now before night,” said iron fist. They all got in the car they called doctor vroom.
When they got there the building was 1000ft above the ground they couldn’t believe it. So off to above the clouds they went. They’re hearts were beating fast as they were all scared. They got to the top, it was too late, The demolishers were already there. “I thought Jarvis said they’d be there at night” said Luke war, “well obviously he was wrong” said James choles, “ i got a plan” said James choles. Luke war shaped shift in to the manager of the building as he left the elevator and slade turn around and got a fright and Luke War said “ is everything ok up here” doctor doom reply with “yes everything is going ok” the luke war a.k.a the manager said “ay what's that over there?” the demolishers got afraid that he was gonna find out that the secret chemical tean luke war turned around to go back to the Elevator with his crew and then shape shift into one of the best things they have ever seen it was a hero with a blue suit with a big S on it, a red cape and this hero that he just read about it was SUPERMAN!!!! Doing an amazing pose with his crew back up behind him in a triangle “ the savers i should have known” said slade. In battle they went fighting each other.
fighting each other the demolishers were losing as they lost there best person darkside as Luke war head butted him in the chest and fell over the edge of the building as now that there is only slade and doctor doom left fight the three of them. Slade dies by Accidentally swinging his sword in wrong Direction and stabbing his self and now its 3v1 and you know who won the savers, the savers that all ways save the day its in there name. So the world live safe for the rest of the year.
Thursday, 30 July 2020
Lesson 1 The Windmill Farmer
WALT: Write a metaphor or personification poem.
The storm is a raging gorilla,
Dangerous and terrifying. It tackles and charges
At the windmills across the landscape,
Like a giant front rower beast. The loud sound of
A gorilla roaring louder than ever.
It runs through the windmill breaking one
By one, by punching them. Completely unstoppable,
As nobody can harm it. Breaking, raging and angry.
Wednesday, 1 July 2020
Boat
Tuesday, 30 June 2020
My Escaping story
Tuesday, 23 June 2020
Antarctica
Monday, 15 June 2020
school work in lock down
She took a break because she was struggling to walk properly. Her journey began at the end of the path, as it was the beggining of the twisted stairs. she couldn’t see what direction the stairs were going. She keeped going till the stair way stop. The stairs were in weird directions. It was like a snake moving side to side. It took her a long time to get to the top but she didn’t give up. When she got to the top She saw the door. She was happy because the stories she was toldit was true but there were two guards guarding the door. she walked up to the door and the guard said “if you enter you must answer a riddle from the both of us”. “oK” said the woman. The first guard said “if you get it wrong we will have to send you back to the bottom of the mountain”. She was terrified because it took her hours to get up the mountain and the stairs. “o”K She said with a scared voice. “what has a head and a tail but cant talk” said the first guard. She was thinking and thinking she pulled out a coin out of her pocket to hold on to. But when she looked at it she said “this side has a head, she flipped it and said, this side has tales” So she walked up to the guard and said “a coin in a confident voice”. “yes” said the first guard, “ Now You Must Answer My Riddle” said the other guard. oK said the woman. But this time the guard had a paper that she thought was really cool and it said CAN YOU SPOT SPOT THE MISTAKE 1 2 3 4 6 7 8 9 10 She asked the guard She asked the guard if she could get a closer look at the paper. While lookingat the riddle she was whispering to her self “can you spot the mistake, can you spot the mistake” then looking 1 2 3 4 6 7 8 9 10 looking and looking she could not see it but then she read it again “can you spot spot huh? it says can you spot spot the mistake” so she walk up to the second guard and said “the mistake is that it says can you spot spot the mistake”. “Yes you a right” said the second guard so they let her through the doors and it was there right in front her eyes “yes, yes it true” the woman said with tears “its really true”.so she walked up to get a map with some treasure. under the map was a key to unlock the box that the treasure was in she opened it the was gold, a ruby, diamonds and a hole lot of cash. she walk back down the snake stairs and the mountain, “finally i can save my job from the builders trying to brake it and i can live a healthy life no more troubles at all.
The end