Monday, 15 June 2020

school work in lock down

during lock down I have been doing online class meetings so I can keep learning. while we are doing online class meetings we also get some work from our teacher like, maths, reading, writing and more. so for writing our teacher whaea Annie give's us a story starter so we add some more to it, So here is one of my stories that i have written .



Skypath

She took a break because she was struggling to walk properly. Her journey began at the end of the path, as  it was the beggining of the twisted stairs. she couldn’t see what direction the stairs were going. She keeped going till the stair way stop. The stairs were in weird directions. It was like a snake moving side to side. It took her a long time to get to the top but she didn’t give up. When she got to the top She saw the door. She was happy because the stories she was toldit was true but there were two guards guarding the door. she walked up to the door and the guard said “if you enter you must answer a riddle from the both of us”. “oK” said the woman. The first guard said “if you get it wrong we will have to send you back to the bottom of the mountain”. She was terrified because it took her hours to get up the mountain and the stairs. “o”K She said with a scared voice. “what has a head and a tail but cant talk” said the first guard. She was thinking and thinking she pulled out a coin out of her pocket to hold on to. But when she looked at it she said “this side has a head, she flipped it and said,  this side has tales” So she walked up to the guard and said “a coin in a confident voice”. “yes” said the first guard, “ Now You Must Answer My Riddle” said the other guard. oK said the woman. But this time the guard had a paper that  she thought was really  cool and it said CAN YOU SPOT SPOT THE MISTAKE        1 2 3 4 6 7 8 9 10  She asked the guard She asked the guard if she could get a closer look at the paper. While lookingat the riddle she was whispering to her self “can you spot the mistake, can you spot the mistake” then looking   1 2 3 4 6 7 8 9 10  looking and looking she could not see it but then she read it again “can you spot spot huh? it says can you spot spot the mistake”  so she walk up to the second guard and said “the mistake is that it says can you spot spot the mistake”. “Yes you a right” said the second guard so they let her through the doors and it was there right in front her eyes “yes, yes it true” the woman said with tears “its really true”.so she walked up to get a map with some treasure. under the map was a key to unlock the box that the treasure was in she opened it the was gold, a ruby, diamonds and a hole lot of cash. she walk back down the snake stairs and the mountain, “finally i can save my job from the builders trying to brake it and i can live a healthy life no more troubles at all.


The end

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