Tuesday, 11 June 2019

ALL ABOUT ME

KIORA my name is tumoana and i’m a year 5 and i go to waitohu School. I have seven sisters and 4 brothers. MY teacher is Mrs spratt. I like to practice guitar at home when i’m not doing anything. My favourite sport is rugby and my favourite food is pizza.

Thank you for looking at my profile have a good day.

               
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  1. Anonymous18 June 2019 at 09:55

    Kia ora Tumoana you just need to do some corrections around the word kia ora because thats not all capitals and MY needs to be corrected to My. I havetn played the guitar before but it sounds pretty cool. Maybe i'll play the guitar someday.

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