I love bike riding Because you can bike anywhere . So on Saturday Me and my Nan went for a bike ride. I had to bike behind her because I got scared if I didn't follow the rules.
First We went to the park to shoot some hoops but then we ended up playing two on two. 5 minutes later my nan had a drink and went to her friends house for a little bit while I stayed playing one on one with the other boys. When she came back she told me that they were watching the new spider man movie we went there watch it for a little bit then we left to go and get a Ice cream. When we got there we left our bikes outside of the dairy. We went inside and I got a cookies and cream with chocolate sauce on top. We when and sit down on a seat close to the library and our ice cream were melting.
We finished our ice cream bike home to have dinner. And I still biked behind my Nan.
Tuesday, 29 October 2019
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Hi Tumoana. I enjoy riding bikes too. I like how you added heaps of interesting things but you forgot to put some and's in there.
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