Thursday, 30 July 2020


Lesson 1 The Windmill Farmer

WALT: Write a metaphor or personification poem. 


The storm is a raging gorilla,

Dangerous and terrifying. It tackles and charges

At the windmills across the landscape,

Like a giant front rower beast. The loud sound of

A gorilla roaring louder than ever. 

It runs through the windmill breaking one

By one, by punching them. Completely unstoppable,

As nobody can harm it. Breaking, raging and angry. 


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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous30 July 2020 at 11:22

    I like that the storm was a ragging garila cool have more

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