Friday, 21 August 2020

Up in the clouds fight

 Way up in the clouds fighting his enemy for a secret Chemicals that will demolish the world… It all started with James choles ( a Secret hero ) with powers, speed, flight, move things with your mind and lazer eyes. As he was told by his crew (the savers) james choles, iron fist with the powers to punch anything in the world and jump 200 Metres high in the sky and luke war with the powers Invincible and able to shape shift.


The savers were told that the demolishers were hiding a dangerous chemical up in the clouds that can  kill everyone on the planet apart from the demolishers and luke war. “They are planning on killing everyone tonight” said Jarvis there Organiser. “We should get going now before night,” said iron fist. They all got in the car they called doctor vroom.


When they got there the building was 1000ft above the ground they couldn’t believe it. So off to above the clouds they went. They’re hearts were beating fast as they were all scared. They got to the top, it was too late, The demolishers were already there. “I thought Jarvis said they’d be there at night” said Luke war, “well obviously he was wrong” said James choles, “ i got a plan” said James choles. Luke war shaped shift in to the manager of the building as he left the elevator and slade turn around and got a fright and Luke War said “ is everything ok up here” doctor doom reply with “yes everything is going ok” the luke war a.k.a the manager said “ay what's that over there?” the demolishers got afraid that he was gonna find out that the secret  chemical tean luke war turned around to go back to the Elevator with his crew and then shape shift into one of the best things they have ever seen it was a hero with a blue suit with a big S on it, a red cape and this hero that he just read about it was SUPERMAN!!!! Doing an amazing pose with his crew back up behind him in a triangle “ the savers i should have known” said slade. In battle they went fighting each other. 




fighting each other the demolishers were losing as they lost there best person darkside as Luke war head butted him in the chest and fell over the edge of the building as now that there is only slade and doctor doom left fight the three of them. Slade dies by Accidentally swinging his sword in wrong Direction and stabbing his self and now its 3v1 and you know who won the savers, the savers that all ways save the day its in there name. So the world live safe for the rest of the year.


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