Thursday, 28 May 2020

Earthquake

Its the 25th of may 2020 on a Monday im getting ready for school just finished having breakfast then i have to do the dishes. After i finish doing the dishes i go to my mum to see if there is anything else she needs me to do but instead she tell me to hold onto her hand so i say "ok mum?'' then out of know where there come a huge Earthquake that's shaking our house like a giant has just jumped up and down mum holding on tight to my hand and so am I then she runs under the door way thing while im trying to run out side but she pull's me and my sister under the door way thing and my sister is about cry and everything in our house nearly fall's everywhere on the ground ( lucky it didn't) After that we sat back on the couch getting ready to run back under the door way thing again as if there was another earthquake about to happen, My mum is texting people if they a alright while my heart is beating really fast like i just finished running a mile then my mum checks how big the earthquake was and man... IT WAS HUGE!!! it was 5.4 followed by 45 after shocks today, that was shocking news to me.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous28 May 2020 at 11:35

    WOW tumoana best writting i've ever seen mind blowing

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  2. Anonymous29 May 2020 at 12:44

    Kia Ora Tumoana,
    It’s me Carys. I really like your writing. Ka Pai.
    I really hope you can write another story soon about something else that is just as interesting.
    Try and remember to read it before you publish it and make sure that the spelling/punctuation is correct.

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